During the development of my animatic, I've made some changes to the script, including the addition of an interaction between Sunny and Alistair in which they share their pronouns with each other and talk about Sunny being misgendered at school.
I've removed the lines from the teacher, they didn't feel relevant and would have required an additional voice actor.
I've also adjusted the interactions between June and Alistair, and Alistair and Sunny in Scenes 4 and 5.
With this version of the script, I feel like the story captures the feelings I want it to evoke. I previously had some worries about sending the script to my voice actors and not achieving the right mood or feeling from the film. I feel this version captures the essence and I feel ready to source my voice actors now.
Tuesday, March 22, 2022
Script: Updates
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